Thursday
Mar062008
Inside Joke
Thursday, March 6, 2008 at 07:05PM Sometimes these things start out with too many syllables in each line,
which screws up the cadence
and violates time
so I have to edit
to make it sound fine
while you can still get it
and see the thing's spine
which is deeply embedded
but jeez I do love and I just want to keep and I'm too soft to change that beginning and ending...
line.
Pete |
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really it might,
sorry,
won't happen again
really it might,
sorry,
won't happen again